What i felt once, and
what i am feeling today
diverge with a long rift;
like the smiles of the cresent moon,
day by day love changes its look-
from the pinkish eyes to the blue lips /(colours r deliberately made opposite)
dreams get poisoned,and
remains the blooded heart.
* * *
Someone soothes with care,
gives solace to to the vehement feelings,
palms are enclosed in one's warm grip;
and,
everything get enlivened ...........
'Love!' what I knew before stood amazed later!!!.......
excellent. And it is obvious that your poem means it is excellent.
ReplyDeletesounds very deep in thought..!!some of it r passing over by our knowledge...whch r still to b faced n experienced..may b thts y..!!
ReplyDeletewe liked it..hope some more like this..!!
our BEST WISHES r wid u.!!
Thnx Rashmi n Arvind for d remarks.It is written perhaps a decade before.Experience comes form others feelings also when shared with me ;those too a poet,a writer feels n makes his or her treasure.So,never personal experience always,i just becomes bit more sensitive n empathitic to feel them as mine,that's all.Thanking u for participation which enhances my spirits....
ReplyDeletesasmita.
Hi,readers,i have done some grammatical
ReplyDeletemistakes,in my previous note.sorry for that.
sasmita.