The last line of the third poem touches heart. So also the first four line of the second stanza of the first poem. These poems I think from your old collections. I like all these. All are beautiful.
in this poem particularly i got a line called.."digbalaya..swapna o pratarana ra jagatiye."tht touched a lot...d description of digbalaya is very much liked above all...n itz also superb as others..however m feeling tht i've understood this poem upto a grt extent in comparision to others...m understanding d words n also feeling d poem throughly..!!so nice one we liked it..!!
The last line of the third poem touches heart. So also the first four line of the second stanza of the first poem. These poems I think from your old collections. I like all these. All are beautiful.
ReplyDeletein this poem particularly i got a line called.."digbalaya..swapna o pratarana ra jagatiye."tht touched a lot...d description of digbalaya is very much liked above all...n itz also superb as others..however m feeling tht i've understood this poem upto a grt extent in comparision to others...m understanding d words n also feeling d poem throughly..!!so nice one we liked it..!!
ReplyDeletethnx a lot to both of u.
ReplyDeleteyeah,digbalaya has been used in dffrnt xprssn,like-neela swapna n dhusara baastabataa,swapna n prataaranaa-etc
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